AUDIENCE FEEDBACK

 

ON SECOND DRAFT:

 

 

GEORGIA 17: I think this has improved from your first draft, and you have got some more creative ideas into your plot which will make your opening more interesting.

 

MEGAN 17: I think the montage idea will be really creative and help set a solid action code to help the auidence understand the problem within the narrative. However i think you could do something within the sequence to help suggest why Ronnie is going to prison to help make it extra clear for the audience.

 

ROB 23: I like the action and thrill throughout the shots it will emphasis the tension within the opening scene. The montage will make the film more atmospheric and realistic. I think you could also add a shot or perform an action code that will resemble the reason why this has all happened.